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When we talk I feel hope
When we're apart there's a longing
When we're together I feel content
Then we separate and I there's regret
I try my hardest to give up
I curse my emotions
There's no denying how I feel
I convince myself that there's a chance
Maybe you feel the same way
I tell myself that there's something there
That we could be together
Then I remember the truth
There's me and there's you
There's no me and you
No matter what I want
I know it's not going to happen
But then we talk and I feel hope
When we're apart there's a longing
When we're together I feel content
Then we separate and I there's regret
I try my hardest to give up
I curse my emotions
There's no denying how I feel
I convince myself that there's a chance
Maybe you feel the same way
I tell myself that there's something there
That we could be together
Then I remember the truth
There's me and there's you
There's no me and you
No matter what I want
I know it's not going to happen
But then we talk and I feel hope
I literally spat my life out onto a page with this one. This is how I feel right now, and I just wanted to express that.
As always comments criticism are appreciated. Thank you.
As always comments criticism are appreciated. Thank you.
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I am always appreciative of raw poetry. For me, it makes it much more relate-able. I used to feel this way about a friend of mine, it's nice to re-visit that with no pain. You have done well.